Ziga
A manga about a young man who’s nightmares come to life when a giant monster destroys his city.
We’ve discussed this on an older episode.
I think there’s a fundamental problem with your story if your twist is obvious to the reader. Writer Rokurou Sano tries to setup this big reveal a few chapters down the line but it made the preamble was just a waste of time. Kentarou Hidano is a fine artist but nothing in Ziga really stood out and impressed me. I think the readers of Weekly Shonen Jump agreed as this one was canceled really fast.
~dakazu